The Dead Tree

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When we came out of Peachtree Cafe and got in our truck which was parked in a different place, we saw a dead tree behind The Family Medical Center...I asked Tommy is that a buzzard in the top of that dead tree behind the medical center..He said what dead tree then he said yes I see the tree but it isn't a buzzard but an owl for it is too light to be a buzzard..He decided to go over and see what it was but when we got to the traffic light which was much closer I said I believe it is just a limb..He went on over there and went in behind the medical building and we both said no that is just a dead limb..We had a good laugh..It was funny..LOL..

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There was a buzzard who lived in a tree Behind the medical shop, cute was he Surveying our town Such a funny clown No, just dead limb the highest one you see Two old people totally mistaken No way this bird will eat any bacon For it's not a bird Just our vision blurred Figure it out, yes, we are so shaken

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Lunita Blanca

Date: 12/20/2017 9:48:00 AM

You are old when nothing is fun enough to make you forget the weather. Good awareness Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/20/2017 4:06:00 PM

Carlos, I must be really old then for I don't like getting out in inclement weather..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

James Horn

Date: 12/19/2017 5:17:00 AM

No matter how you cut it, one side is always rougher than the ther. A dead branch on a tree on the ground eventually will be and a cross was used to make so Son back to heaven His father could take. So who does bring back the bacon there in Georgia anyway? Jim Horn

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/19/2017 7:50:00 AM

James, I was writing about the fact that my husband and myself no longer can see as well as we once could see..We thought that a limb on a still standing dead tree looked like a bird on a limb on that tree to us..LOL..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2017 4:57:00 PM

lol Sara...sure made me smile - did you then go and have your eyes tested at the medical center! :-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/15/2017 5:58:00 AM

Jan, Not only did I see a bird in that tree when we started moving in the truck going toward that dead tree I saw that bird move and I told my husband it is going to fly away..LOL...Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/15/2017 5:56:00 AM

Jan, Until my husband had his hip surgery in September I was going to an eye doctor about every two months since I had surgery for cataracts, she says I have developed glaucoma so I have an excuse..In my left eye I have 20/200 vision and in my right eye I have good distance vision but no near vision..I guess my vision is not what they say it is..LOL..Sara