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The Beach Ballet

In a distant land many miles away Lived a hermit who dilly dallied all through the day When it came time for slumber He resorted to counting numbers Of young lasses showing asses part of the beach ballet © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/8/2015 4:14:00 PM

Of whom would record this dude's legacy but you, Limerick King? These verses amaze me.. : ) Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2015 5:02:00 PM

I must pass the "Limerick King" designation to my buddy, John Wulf! (The Wulfman)!!! Love ya... Jackson xxx

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 9/6/2015 8:45:00 PM

I can't take it Jack, you are cracking me up. ; )

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/6/2015 9:20:00 PM

Sorry Gwen... hope you're not injured too badly!!! LOL xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 9/6/2015 6:46:00 PM

Would you believe he could possibly me??? Did you leave the be out?...No Jack that's not you ...you do not dilly dally...but only because you are a successful workaholic....

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/6/2015 8:15:00 PM

Can't slip anything passed you eh, dear Judy! Just goes to prove I'm not infallible! LOL Love, Jackson xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 9/6/2015 5:37:00 PM

'Ain't' no shilly-shally about him! WOW

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/6/2015 5:52:00 PM

Would you believe he could possibly me??? Love, Jackson! xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/6/2015 9:51:00 AM

Oh Lord A Mercy! Grandpa Troll is ROTFFMAO! Don't let Lady Cathie read this, or she'll never let you on the beach again! PS. LimmerWulf just wrote a limmerick about breathing his last air. So I decided when I die he can write my Dragon poetry book. Dragon and I want you to do some pictures for it, and send them to John and Sue, to go in the book for charity. That way you won't be left out! Hey! That crazy John started it! Honest! I'm going to my annual heart Dr. checkup in the next few weeks...

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/6/2015 10:14:00 AM

When we age, some of the great pleasures still in life is watching the young fillies displaying their equipment!!! LOL Love, Old Jack xxx

Carol Eastman
Date: 9/6/2015 9:52:00 AM

PS. I'm not expecting to kick the bucket... But would hate Dragon, Grandpa Troll, the other Trolls, and the menagerie... to be lost without having their fling! Just saying!