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The Adventures of Jim the Trim- At the Metro

Jim the Trim’s been watching too much video The kind that caused rise in his libido Mind still on a femme fatale Was brought to the hospital His front was trapped by the doors of the Metro. KIM PATRICE NUNEZ 10 April 2015

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/15/2015 8:55:00 PM

I waiting for the next issue of Jim the Trim!!!!!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/15/2015 3:50:00 PM

That is too funny Kim! One of those oops moments! Very creative!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2015 11:08:00 AM

:)))) ..... Embarrassing :))) ........... maybe better .... happy as small (?) - Well done, Kim !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :))))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/12/2015 12:40:00 PM

..... medium ?? :))))))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2015 11:20:00 PM

hahaha. That is hilarious. Too much Viagra i'd say also. You are a gas!!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/11/2015 3:44:00 AM

Oh! This sure was a deflating experience! I am sure he's been discharged by now, ready for the next episode:) hugs // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/11/2015 3:16:00 AM

i'm waiting for the complete series of jim.. this is hilarious, kim.. kaloka!... greeat job!.. huggs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/11/2015 1:38:00 AM

His front was trapped by the doors of the Metro., that! LOL

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/11/2015 1:24:00 AM

LOL Happens to me all the time!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/10/2015 10:41:00 PM

UT oh too much of a good thing! Light & Love

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/10/2015 8:54:00 PM

Oh My...poor guy...that caused some damage this time Kim...hmmm maybe I read the out of order??? J/K ~jan

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 4/10/2015 6:46:00 PM

It hurts just to read it. lol

Jan Allison

Date: 4/10/2015 3:52:00 PM

OUCH! lol:-) Hugs jan xx