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Such a Pail

Such a pail I have a sweet beautiful daughter Who is always fetching me water Each day without fail she has such a pail When my daughter brings me the water Limerick Contest December 24, 2015 Sponsored by Jan Allison

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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/30/2015 7:47:00 PM
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Hi Andrea: I made a change in the poem but I was too late to re enter. (Ha ha) This is the second time this has happened in her popular limerick contests.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/30/2015 6:56:00 PM
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hey, I saw this one before, but can't find my comment! It is right on for rhyme and syllable count!! Can't wait till Jan judges these!
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Date: 12/30/2015 2:17:00 PM
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Ralph.. Happy New Years... Love LINDA
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 12/30/2015 6:43:00 AM
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Ah, yes, I now get it. Thanks for the clarification. / M
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 12/29/2015 8:45:00 PM
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Didn't know there was a limerick contest. Will check it out. Not sure of Sara's play on words. Best to you. / M
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/30/2015 6:37:00 AM
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Hi Maurice: a sad attempt on "such appeal"
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/29/2015 4:24:00 PM
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Reads like a winner..Great contest entry..I like the play on words..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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