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Spring Surprise

There once was a girl named Bo Her dad did not like her beau So one day they eloped But Bo’s dad dashed their hope He sprang from behind with bolo. *bolo - noun, a large, heavy, single-edged knife or machete for hacking, used in the Philippines and by the U.S. Army CONTEST : SPRING FORWARD - 10th Place SPONSOR : DEBBIE GUZZI 05 March 2015

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Nandita Das

Date: 5/8/2015 1:16:00 AM

Lol...made me laugh...A good one. #7.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2015 2:45:00 PM

Great humour Kim congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2015 2:23:00 PM

oh I do remember this cute one. Congrats to you, Kim

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/10/2015 10:22:00 PM

Thank you Andie! To you and Sammy too!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/7/2015 4:11:00 PM

Thanks for reading my "Tell Me " Poem. I have now finished writing it.

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 8:45:00 AM

Hi Bro Ricky, thanks for the notification. Sorry, just got back, it's Sunday, so was out the whole day. Will read it now.

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 3/6/2015 4:59:00 PM

Another gem my Dear, - but what a way to go !!! letting his little girl know, he was still in control. - Dad slicing up the sweet dreams of a future .

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/6/2015 5:32:00 PM

Ah, he would have, given the chance...but the lovers sprang in opposite direction...regrouped at the edge of the village...and finally eloped. Poor grandpa had no choice but to accept the beau! lol...But that bit of info I can no longer add to the verse...Thank you sire, for the visit and comment... Hugs and smiles! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/6/2015 8:37:00 AM

This is fun, good luck in Debbie's contest.

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/6/2015 5:26:00 PM

Thank you Richard, for the visit and support for the contest. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2015 7:07:00 AM

- Great one, Kim !!! - This gave me a smile :)), and that's what limerick should .... - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/6/2015 7:10:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise. Appreciate your visit and comments. Wish you the same, my dear! HUg you back! :D Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2015 11:40:00 PM

YIKES with a bolo. Glad you gave the definition of that word. It really makes the ending come alive!!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/5/2015 6:05:00 PM

Dear Kim A very interesting write here my friend nice verse and content, good luck in the contest, and thanks for your comment on the poems also, you have a great night, cheri

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2015 9:06:00 AM

Creative choice to use in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 3/5/2015 8:39:00 AM

Love your humour, Kim! I'll have to look up that Bolo...sounds like it could cause some real damage! All the best. // paul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/5/2015 7:29:00 AM

Hope He didnt use that Bolo and rhey made it to be together..An excellent post.

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/5/2015 7:20:00 AM

Either way... love your limericks! Are you the wife of a military man? Big smackers, Jack xxx

Fadi Mathew

Date: 3/5/2015 6:59:00 AM

I hope they managed to elope! :) Beautiful one my friend .. I enjoyed it.. Wish you the best of luck in the contest!