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Split In Twain By Divorce

LIMERICK You can have the two kids but not the hound And I'll need the Caddie to get around Said she I'll take the house You good for nothin' louse By your cock and bull I will not be bound HAIKU love that drifts apart like two diverging rivers ne'er to flow as one COUPLET Their marriage made in heaven was as solid as the Rock of Gibraltar 'Til his boozing and roving eyes caused the whole affair to falter Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 5 in PDs "Divorce Club" Contest - December 2010

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 12/5/2010 5:09:00 PM

Congrats, my friend. Nice going. Ralph

John Freeman

Date: 12/5/2010 9:24:00 AM

Congratulations, my friend, on this worthy of honor job. Agape, Moses

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/2/2010 2:55:00 PM

Congrats to you also Bob...well done my friend

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 12:44:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Bob

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 9:04:00 AM

The limerick is funny, the haiku scenic, the couplet great, fun set, congrats on your win:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 7:00:00 AM

Good morning, Robert! &) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 6:29:00 AM

So happy to be sharing our fifth placement together.. hope for the BRONCOS.. maybe a new coach on the horizon..luv.. keep the faith.. no where to go but UP...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 6:28:00 AM

Congrats Bob my friend on your big win in P.D.'s great contest on divorce with this brilliant write and entry luv... enjoy another top ten win today with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 5:51:00 AM

Congratulations Bob for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol

Adell Foster

Date: 11/26/2010 5:39:00 PM

Ha ha, Robert, this is a great entry, Good luck in the contest :-) ~ Adell

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/26/2010 8:37:00 AM

Bob, I seriously love your entry for Pd's contest.. Not to mention the title --- Wishing you all the best and have a grand weekend ;-) Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/25/2010 11:55:00 PM

a laughing roar of a poem, robert... love found and lost truly highlighted here... i guess mine was more tricky! best of luck in the contest! warmest, nette

Skat A

Date: 11/25/2010 7:55:00 PM

SMILES BOB H. THE ONE THING I LOVE ABOUT THIS CONTEST IS THE OPINION AND THE VIEW OF THE ONES HAPPILY FOREVER MARIED. ,Love it BOB, best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/25/2010 4:44:00 PM

hahahaha. the couplet made laugh aloud. In haiku you have nicely define what is divorce with good images, Bob

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/25/2010 12:18:00 PM

what a perfect entry for the contest, love all three forms, good luck, you did a fantastic job with it

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/25/2010 11:51:00 AM

GREAT limerick, Bob!! The division of property holds up many divorces. Did you see the Michael Douglas movie "War of the Roses"? Same theme as your limerick. The haiku is lovely and very touching and there's a lot of truth in your couplet. Best wishes in the contest with this outstanding entry. Happy Thanksgiving. Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/25/2010 11:49:00 AM

Good one Mr Bob..I like your limerick the best...Happy Day..not to much pie now! BG