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Splendor On the Beach

Two lovers are walking the sand Each gazing at their wedding band Their deeply felt love Sent down from above Has been touched by God's mighty hand He peers into her lovely eyes As slowly the sun starts to rise The splendor of knowing Their vast love is showing Completes them,they do realize She places her hand on his chest And whispers that she loves him best Her kisses are sweet As his heart skips a beat They both know their union is blessed By Deb Wilson for contest"Loveland Limerick" sponsored by Linda -Marie--sweetheart of PS inspired by picture #JT 76969

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Date: 4/12/2011 4:54:00 AM
Many congrats Deb on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/11/2011 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 4/11/2011 6:21:00 AM
Wonderful rendering, Deb, i really like this. Harry
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:16:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:23:00 PM
Very lovey entry and great win. I wonder how she chose among all these . Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:02:00 PM
Such beautiful images, such romance. Many congrats.
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:59:00 PM
my cheeks flush, deb! … my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/10/2011 2:33:00 PM
AHHH, yes, and love is a many splendored thing. Your poem reminds me of that movie with the two on the beach! congratulations.
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:06:00 AM
Congrats on this very sweet write for Linda's Contest Deb :) enjoyed this one :)
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:02:00 AM
A lovely poem Deb, beautifully done.Congratulations on you win..Love,Gautami
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, Deb
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:25:00 AM
Good to be sharing the placement with such an accomplished contestant Deb, & congratulaions!
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:17:00 AM
Good to see your poem in the top 6, Deb, Congratulations on your honored 6th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:00:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your success in my contest with this lovely entry.. thankxx for your support always luv..
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Date: 3/15/2011 6:09:00 PM
Nice interpretation of the picture, Deb
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:30:00 PM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Deb.. good luck luv.. reading fully as judging time draws closer .. as always ..amazing lines..
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