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Sneaky Ninjas

Black ninjas under the moonless sky Strike raw fear in their enemies white They dye their eyes black As ink to attack Like demons rising out of the night! 11/5/11 Received 3rd place in "sneaky ninjas" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 5:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with your "Ninja Limerick" poem Susan. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/13/2011 6:34:00 AM

Congrats for win. Thanks, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/11/2011 8:50:00 PM

Congrats Susan on a super win with this wonderful ninja Limerick luv..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/11/2011 6:42:00 PM

Susan~~~ninjas in the black of night...what a scary sight..congrats on this most excellent entry. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2011 9:34:00 AM

Hey, Susan, way to go. I see you won the ninja contest! I snuck mine in at the VERY last moment. no joke! A big congrats to you!!

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/11/2011 8:39:00 AM

Nice one Susan. Congratulations on your win. in PD's contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2011 12:53:00 AM

SUSAN~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, for your super ninja entry. Thank you for supporting my Sneaky Ninja contest* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2011 10:04:00 PM

Good imagery limerick!! That was funny about the smart phone, Susan, that your dad had to take a class. Where can I find that class? hahaha

Jack Horne

Date: 11/6/2011 7:07:00 AM

LOL, witty piece, Susan

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/5/2011 9:17:00 PM

SUSAN, THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST,..P.D.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/5/2011 10:28:00 AM

oh, very sneaky indeed, Susan! I really liked how you described their stealth here & so cool, for some reason, I just imagine those eyes widening in fear... :D