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. Slammed by Mother...President...Teacher...Poet...&...Form A MOTHERS LOVE Mother always called me a lousy kid, with a shove I was the only kid she wanted to get rid of On my head she always smacked me hard. She would always slam me calling me a retard My mother gave me the best slamming love. ((( my mother the best slammer there ever was))) _______________________________________________ WE ARE THE WORLD Slam back at any country, at any given event I feel bad for any so called President. "WE THE PEOPLE" the Republic and the Democrat. Slamming each other talking crap. In a world full of slam and argument. ((( The world toughest fight is slam not war ))) _______________________________________________ TEACHERS PET Our teachers kept on and on how we where wrong with a fuzz. She just stood there and slammed each and everyone of us. Making us write an essay on broken rules. Kept us all after school calling us stupid fools Who knew teachers where allowed to slam and cuss? ((( Teachers words of slam can ruin any future ))) ______________________________________________ ROAD BLOCK Have you ever heard of a poet blocker. All they are is a slam stocker They over abuse their blocking right. Trying to make other poets fight. Always trying to slam a point across, like a mocker. ((( Hating against any form of poetry is a slam it self ))) _____________________________________________ JUDGING CONTEST Can you guess that slam is just a risky business Picking out the best slam words from the rest. Testing out a form we don't know how to let it flow. Darn the soup for putting slam on the box below. Even the best have join my slamming contest. ((( Thank you Soup for SLAMMING us with your A-Z list-form))) _____________________________________________

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Date: 5/9/2012 9:34:00 AM
More awesome slamming - I hope you will do more of these in the future?! the 1st one was my favorite :)
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Date: 9/16/2010 12:37:00 AM
You have the great skills and hidden beauty in your pen to change not only the color of things, but even the shape of things. This is a rare unique quality my friend. I see in you the signs of a great pleader and a brilliant attorney like Portia of the Merchant of Venice. A brilliant piece of creative writing. Great write my friend. Sorry that I missed this great beauty earlier. Love and best wishes always ....Ravindra....Poet D.
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:01:00 PM
I guess i just dont get it. I read the poem and the other comments so i must be missing something. Keep up the slam?
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Date: 8/5/2010 3:33:00 AM
Slamming the slammer! Slam poetry is PERFORMANCE poetry. Slam and hate are NOT the same. Emotions like love, hate, joy, etc. is what slam poetry is about. Hatred hurts. You have identified MANY of the hurtful things people do to one another. And I have witnessed each type of hatred that you have described...even firsthand. So, knowing how much it hurts (UNLESS ONE IS FORTUNATE ENOUGH TO BECOME DESENSITIZED TO HURTFUL WORDS...NOT I) it seems spiritually destructive to me. Great poem!
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Date: 7/31/2010 9:21:00 PM
this is a great statement Sid.. lol.you're mom had to be awesome, because here you are now, a super bad slammer.hhaha.. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/26/2010 12:06:00 AM
P.D we are all of us mostly just rhymers around here. hahaha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/22/2010 7:04:00 PM
I like your style of writing and the flow of your poetry, I enjoyed it very much. :) paula
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Date: 7/22/2010 1:01:00 PM
Wow! This is immediate, fresh and gritty. You really have the verve in this format! Regards, Gerard
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Date: 7/22/2010 7:53:00 AM
Now, that's what I call a Slammin' suite of limericks...Indeed such slams on one's life would darken or sadden the soul, unless one learns to persevere... Keep Flowing P.D. --- I enjoyed the read. Many Blessings, Adell
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Date: 7/22/2010 1:15:00 AM
nice expression poet...great write....^_^ v
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Date: 7/21/2010 4:30:00 PM
Cry Out Loud! Phil
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Date: 7/21/2010 2:03:00 AM
'Slamming love'...I really like that, PD! You have a unique style which I always enjoy reading - Tim
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:52:00 PM
Thank you! I like your poem by the way (=
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Date: 7/20/2010 1:01:00 PM
Awesome slams PD, You are the queen of slamming, I bow down to you!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:55:00 AM
I'm glad your intention was clean cos Caroline is a kind lady,and im glad its just misunderstanding,and No one wants you out of soup,Why?we are a family. .God bless C.C
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:19:00 AM
Sorry I missed the contes,,p,d,
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Date: 7/20/2010 8:52:00 AM
Sorry she made you erase your comment Celene Crescent but she is missdirecting every one,, I dedicated this to her contest,, not to her..,i missed out on her(((anti-slam contest of hers??))) I would never harm anybody, just because they are against me being on the soup..I enjoy everyone, here,,i will comment any incomming poem. To me it does not matter if they are know or not..I love being fair with everyone,..thank you any ways for letting me know..so are other poets...p.d.
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Date: 7/20/2010 8:33:00 AM
Dear p.d. I'm sorry i erased my comment,I've hurt My friend Caroline's feeling with saying this poem is creative,didn't realise this poem was about her,i thought she just inspired it. .I would never want to hurt her,so i guess i will read your other poems. .C.C
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Date: 7/20/2010 4:57:00 AM
enjoyed reading this poem, slam--bam, thank you mam!!
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Date: 7/20/2010 3:02:00 AM
Hey pd, a great series of limericks. I enjoyed the read. Best wishes in the contest with your creative and impressive entry ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/19/2010 4:02:00 PM
Slam, Bam, Thank You Ma'am!
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Date: 7/19/2010 2:48:00 PM
Hey P.D. hope u are cool .. we have 100 degree temps all week.. luv it.. pool time.. wrote another Slam for Irma's contest.. hope u like ..check it out..luv.. and enjoy this Monday.. with luv..
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Date: 7/19/2010 9:32:00 AM
Dear PD and I know you were nice &kind enough to tell this old woman your name but I think I forgot..fret. I did enter your contest with a slam poem. I think you were saying I could enter with another form? I like YOU...I enjoy your writes...we need your energy her but I don't like the concept of slam as used to mean saying angry words...I have read slam only means READ OUT LOUD..which we can not do..sigh. But anyway the above verse are all VERY good BUT not limericks NOPE. Light & Love
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:21:00 PM
Interesting. I never came across one like you before ~.~
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Date: 7/18/2010 5:16:00 PM
Very creative indeed!
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