Silly Woman

There was a silly woman from Detroit Who at everything was adroit She couldn't ev'n boil an egg She just kept them in a keg And then she threw them like a quoit. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 10.21.2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/26/2014 2:55:00 AM

Was she adroit in throwing her eggs like quoits? she was, as you said, then she was not silly hahahahaha. she was not fond of eggs. I played ringtoss in my childhood on a little hillock and "Jack fell down and broke his crown". I broke my two front teeth. However, I am fond of eggs. Thank you D. Love.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:43:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Rajat, for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Len Gasun

Date: 10/22/2014 9:36:00 PM

Good morning my dear friend Dorian! You're giving me a good morning facial exercise by an up to ear smiles thru this splendid limerick of yours.Perhaps that woman thinks she's better at sports than boiling an egg, lol. Very clever write. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for stopping by again on my poem and my honor from you faving it. Have a blessed day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:42:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Leonora, for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/22/2014 8:59:00 PM

"D" an interesting write. Like Richard below, what is a quoit?? First heard here by me. I like very much how you put these Limericks together!! Cheers, Gary P.S. A "7" too!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:41:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Gary, for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/22/2014 7:02:00 PM

Please forgive me, what is a quoit???

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 8:41:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, Richard, for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)D.