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Shock Begins

The close family was all called in Four days since hubby to home had been The snooker hustler played High stakes for which he stayed In the door he came, our shock begins
Written: May 13, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/22/2019 3:08:00 PM
ha ha, had a chuckle
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Date: 6/14/2014 12:25:00 AM
Sara,, :) Congratulations, on your win. "Luv Linda"
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Date: 6/9/2014 4:38:00 PM
Good One Sara. Many congrat's on your win. Elaine
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:39:00 AM
funny limerick Sara congrats on win hugs
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Date: 6/8/2014 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations Sara.
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Date: 6/8/2014 7:33:00 AM
Sara,, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/7/2014 9:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, sara
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Date: 6/7/2014 9:52:00 PM
Congratulations for your win, Sara.
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Date: 5/23/2014 6:01:00 PM
Win or lose? That is the question. You may notice, I have no other suggestion. :) Peace.
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Date: 5/14/2014 3:42:00 PM
Dear Sara, How worried a family would be if the patriarch stayed away to gamble. The shock would soon turn to relief, but he'd have a lot of explaining to do! If this is for the limerick contest, I wish you success! It's always a pleasure to read your words, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2014 11:13:00 AM
I like the limerick, Sara.... not the kind of shock i was thinking of... hope all is well... Linda
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:44:00 PM
Sara. I am not completely sure, but maybe line 3 is not in the rules of the syllable count. I know we can use six syllables. Not sure of 7!
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