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Scuba King

I had all my equipment checked. Everything was laid out on deck. We were suited for game. By the time drop off came my nerves were totally a wreck. I went down to the deep blue sea to see what the sea would show me. Got the scare of my life, a fish big as my wife, and the show in the sea was me. Back on board I dared any to say what went on in the sea that day. Yes, my wife will attest. She cleaned it her best, but that suit, the smell won't go way. May 25 2011 for Carolyn's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/5/2011 7:25:00 AM
Charles, great to see you at the top. Congratulations on your honored placement Souper! Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/5/2011 5:42:00 AM
Nice one Charles, you sure gave me a chuckle this Sunday afternoon. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/4/2011 12:18:00 PM
Funny and a winning write Charles, best wishes..
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:49:00 PM
very very funny. Charles. Got a kick out of this one of yours! Congratulations to you
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Date: 6/3/2011 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/3/2011 2:59:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contetst of carolyn, Charles
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Date: 6/3/2011 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your so wonderfully deserved win in Carolyn's "Attack" contest Charles. Love Carol
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Date: 6/3/2011 1:28:00 PM
Incredibly well written, Charles, and I laughed when you compared the Goliath to your wife. Hmm...wonder what Carolyn's thinking about that? If not for the lack of the apostrophe in "won't," this would have been among the first-place winners. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/3/2011 1:14:00 PM
Great job Charles and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/26/2011 8:16:00 PM
Cute one, Charles and great meter!
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Date: 5/26/2011 4:06:00 AM
I like it - especially the last line as I think I would be in the same boat. Mike
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Date: 5/25/2011 8:09:00 AM
Wonderful write reading the picture of the contest, good luck in the contest, Charles
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