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Ron Dump says he’ll destroy North Korea With finger poised, we have so much to fear He’s a power mad glutton With his hand on the button Will the universe still exist next year? BY JAN ALLISON I just hope his finger gets stuck Where his bum cheeks do tuck I don't live in fear Long as they're up there oh Don why are you such a schmuck BY TIM SMITH He couldn't have made it clearer His objections to North Korea Did his blow up doll fail At the point of his exhale Revenge is a good butt cleaner BY SEREN ROBERTS Ron's trigger finger is too quick to attack Mouth gets him in trouble for talking smack A rocket up his butt Another to his gut Should put an end to Ron Dump, the quack BY LIN LANE In the genre of equal time May I present my 2 cents and a dime Rocket Man's been coddled By Barack Obama's Bobble Now Trump is gonna get him back in line!!! BY CHUCK MELUGIN To the moon ‘North Korea’ the Rocket Man says I can press this button because I’m the Pres But his hands are much too small Can he do it at all? A comedic tragedy like Lucy and Desi Arnaz. BY WINGED WARRIOR Supreme dictator mad Kim Jong un shows off his massive hydrogen gun Donald trump wants to play time for us all to pray Irreversible act when they're done. BY ROY PETTS PLEASE SOUP MAIL ME YOUR POEM IF YOU WANT IT TO BE ADDED 09-19-17

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/26/2017 5:13:00 PM

Roy Dump sounds to he not well liked by the people. Nobody know the constant pressure that these people have. I agree with what Old Buck has said. have a nice eveningmy friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2017 6:15:00 PM

Thanks Darlene :-) hugs jan xx

Old Buck

Date: 10/19/2017 6:45:00 PM

A Side Note: I don't think any of us realize the constant pressure North Korean citizens have lived under for decades. Jan: You know you are one of my favorites but I think Roy Petts has said it best. We need not take sides, there is now where to hide when which ever decides now's the moment to implode. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing this with all of us on the soup. oldbuck

Jan Allison
Date: 10/19/2017 7:13:00 PM

Cheers Old Buck, the situation is scary and I agree we shouldn't take sides BUT it does make great fodder for poets:-) hugs Jan xx

Chuck Melugin

Date: 9/20/2017 4:54:00 PM

In the genre of equal time......May I present my 2 cents and a dime.....Rocket Man's been coddled....By Barack Obama's Bobble......Now Trump is gonna get him back in line!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2017 4:59:00 PM

Great limerick Chuck I will add it to the collaboration:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2017 1:03:00 PM

I'm truly worried about the frivolity our president displays when he taunts an(other) unstable world leader with childish name calling. "Rocket Man" worked for Elton John, but it's not going to work now.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2017 4:10:00 PM

Unstable is the word for both of them Carolyn it is such a worrying state of affairs:-( So glad to see you back i hope you weren't too badly affected by Irma I know she wreaked havoc in so many place:-( hugs jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/20/2017 5:39:00 AM

Yes, very, very clever indeed. Yours is great. Thinking about bullies I've known in my life. They are really sick. We should have had Bernie!! Bullying will never work in the end. The bullied will resist in some way. They always do.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2017 5:43:00 AM

It is so frightening to see what moves these 2 guys will make its like a dreadful game of chess and we are all pawns:-( hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/19/2017 8:39:00 PM

I surely loved this! This is such an amazing write my friend, you are such a remarkable writer my friend! And the other limerick contributors are fabulous as well! I really enjoyed reading these harmonious poems this evening! What fun it was to read all of these! Great Work everyone!!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/20/2017 3:15:00 AM

There is still room for other people to add their contributions Russell:-) hugs jan xx

Niall Fulham

Date: 9/19/2017 5:22:00 PM

Hi Jan/Tim ,,lol more please ::))))hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/19/2017 5:56:00 PM

you can add one Niall lol:-) hugs jan xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 9/19/2017 2:47:00 PM

Lol Jan you have such wonderful poetry ideas.....r.o.f.l...Seren Fav

Tim Smith
Date: 9/19/2017 2:55:00 PM

Lol....get off the floor

Jan Allison
Date: 9/19/2017 2:49:00 PM

I just get inspired by what's around me but it is scary to see Mr Trump making such threats i. Thanks for adding your poem it is superbly funny:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/19/2017 2:09:00 PM

Haha....I just hope his finger gets stuck...where his bum cheeks do tuck...I don't live in fear...long as they're up there....oh Don why are you such a schmuck

Jan Allison
Date: 9/19/2017 2:12:00 PM

ha ha ha I was wondering where your rhyme was going then ... phew lol:-) hugs jan xx