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Rock - Paper - Scissors

~ Paper Snowflake ~ Upon the rock of summer that teem with scissors I forge a winter dream with paper of white and visions of flight each snowflake dance with sunlight gleam ~

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 6/18/2011 11:37:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your fabulous win with this beautiful write on this theme...gautami

Jack Horne

Date: 6/17/2011 11:25:00 AM

Many congrats on your wins in 'Scissors' and 'Sonnets', Rick : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/17/2011 11:21:00 AM

So refreshing..Enjoyed reading this one...Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/17/2011 6:59:00 AM

My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., Rick

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/17/2011 4:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2011 8:48:00 PM

THis is a really prettty one, Rick. Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2011 5:29:00 PM

Thank you for entering in my contest Rick, enjoyed you entry, congrats on your win:),..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2011 5:26:00 PM

Truly a beautiful poem, Rick. I love the way you worked the seasons, especially the dancing snowflakes, into your limerick. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2011 4:58:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your big win in PD's cool contest with this cool entry my friend.. enjoy another victory.. not interested in blogs or blogging any more ..all the fun taken out of it due to the 'haters' here and had enough is all luv.. I am NOT a target for attack if I stay far away ..I only want to write poetry luv..

Constance La France

Date: 6/14/2011 5:46:00 PM

Beautiful Rick, best of luck and thanks so much for my placement in your stone contest, I am very honored~~

Constance La France

Date: 6/14/2011 5:42:00 PM

This is so beautiful Rick, amazing entry for the contest, no doubt a winner and I want to thank you so much for my 8th place in your Stones contest, I am very honored~~

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 6/13/2011 7:10:00 AM

Sheesh, I can't even keep my comments short. LOL. Again, since I'm in this tidy box anyway, enjoyed the read. Adieu! Cyndi

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 6/13/2011 7:08:00 AM

Nicely done. I've really got to learn to put LOTS into little, as you've just done. The problem with fiction writers who dabble with poetry (like myself) is that we wax on. Need to whittle! This one made me smile. Thank you for inspiring a poem I just wrote and posted late last night called Black Heart. It's too long for your contest (I need to learn to follow directions :-) ), but stones somehow led me to Woolf drowning herself with a pocket of stones. Stone forced to murder. lite read, lol!

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 6/13/2011 7:08:00 AM

Emma Mantle

Date: 6/13/2011 2:11:00 AM

Simply beautiful. Love this piece. Best wishes to you for the contest, this is a sure winner. Em :)

Jodie Williams

Date: 6/13/2011 1:18:00 AM

What a beautiful take on the theme, a great read good luck

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/12/2011 11:09:00 PM

beautifully-penned, rick.. winner's delight for you! :) hugggs, nette