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Reformed Witch

Full moon listed, one Halloween night A witch flared radioactive flight Across the bow, around, With such a swooshing sound, Only a few saw this awesome sight. She was adorned in black lacquered dress. Her flight was erratic, under duress. Plunging fast to the ground, A whirlwind dive, no sound, Upon impact, there was such a mess. From the rubble there raised, a new form. However, looked not much of the norm, She stood, trying to sum. Then spoke, watch out for rum. Moreover, she needs to reform.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations Cecil on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2010 11:25:00 AM
Super Limerick Cecil, many congrats on your win in John's contest >> James
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Date: 11/25/2010 11:28:00 AM
great entry Cecil, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 11/25/2010 9:18:00 AM
Enjoyed this Cecil, congratulations on your win in John's contest.. Happy Thanksgiving to you;) Wilma
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:21:00 AM
well executed story limerick, Cecil. Love it. Congratulations to you. Awesome job
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Date: 11/25/2010 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:23:00 PM
Just what we need, Cecil, a teetotaling witch! Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:01:00 PM
Cecil....Congrats on notching up big win in the contest........ Happy Thanksgiving.....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/24/2010 8:11:00 PM
Congrats Cecil on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory tonight with luv..
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Date: 11/24/2010 4:45:00 PM
Tough way to learn a lesson but congratulations Cecil. Great limerick. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, cecil
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:50:00 PM
Funny poem, Cecil! Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations, Cecil for your placement in this fun contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/24/2010 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations Cecil on your worthy poem's third place, and have a happy thanksgiving. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/13/2010 8:16:00 AM
a cool write on holloween night, enjoyed your write., enjoyed this one,..P.D.
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Date: 11/6/2010 8:35:00 AM
excellent write my friend duncan
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Date: 10/29/2010 8:42:00 AM
This is a great entry for John's Halloween Limerick contest, Cecil. Got a funny image of this whirlwind diving witch. Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/28/2010 4:33:00 PM
that is like a reformed prostitute... mayhap?
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:11:00 PM
I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Cecil. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 9:30:00 PM
great job on the Halloween limericks Cecil, I hope they are for the contest, good luck
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:31:00 PM
ha ha ha. that was cute.
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