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In Florida one right hot summer

A free soul was havin' a bummer

So in spray painted undies

One holiday Monday

He split to the Springs with his rummer.

In Florida one right hot summer A free soul was havin' a bummer So in spray painted undies Next holiday Monday He split to the Springs with his rummer. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Equally inspired by a net(te) comment and the lovely natural resources in North Florida

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Date: 8/20/2011 12:46:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this one..Creative individual..Sara
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:18:00 PM
It's nice to see great humor like this! You know the decent good humored poems! Thank you for brightening my evening!!
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:14:00 PM
Hahah, nice humor, nancy
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