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Pickles

She was fat, not pregnant, to say the least. She filled her plate at the family feast. Craving pickles brought her down. Howling laughter brought her frown. Flatulence increased, festivities ceased! © Dane Smith-Johnsen October 16, 2010

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Date: 11/15/2010 8:59:00 PM
hahaha ,I see why PD placed it high!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/15/2010 12:48:00 PM
hehe, nice one Dane Ann. Laughable images I see. Many congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James
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Date: 11/15/2010 10:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:04:00 AM
Cute one Dane, Congratulations on your ace. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/15/2010 7:20:00 AM
Funny write, Dane Ann. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:49:00 PM
HAhaha. Wow Dane Ann. I really laughed with your limerick. Many congratulations for this super win.
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Date: 11/14/2010 7:46:00 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your first place win in P.D.'s contest with this excellent write and win..luv.. enjoy your sweet victory my friend this happy Sunday with lots of luv..
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Date: 11/14/2010 7:20:00 AM
yikes,,this one is to funny. congrats on your iwn. BG
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Date: 11/14/2010 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/14/2010 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dane
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Date: 11/14/2010 4:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1 st place in my contest,,had fun readng every single entry,,p.d.
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Date: 10/27/2010 9:21:00 PM
hahaha VERY good one, DAne Ann, I almost missed seeing yor comment to me tonight. Glad I caught it!! Luv, andrea
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:33:00 AM
funny!!
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:02:00 AM
Nice humorous write on pickles with good images, Dane
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