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Past Life

In past life I hailed from Shitterton and loved good food and plenty of action Once a witch visited town Who taught her art to me clown With my magic wand I had more fun A lass named Bustyview took my fancy Gave me no airs, vane was her beauty Decided to trick her in Prince became I to her grin Lived thereafter happily with she Form: Limerick, 2 stanzas of 5 lines each (syl. count:9,10,7,7,9,10,9,7,7,9), Rhyme: AABBA

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Date: 6/30/2014 3:01:00 PM
ahh those busty women always causing trouble. Light & Love
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 7:50:00 PM
Debbie, thanks for the like but Carolyn got better enteries for her contest and they were all deserving winners. Mohan
Date: 6/30/2014 2:17:00 PM
That was fun. Thanks for the read.
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Date: 6/30/2014 7:51:00 PM
MLK, Thanks for your visit again and the like. Appreciate. Mohan
Date: 6/27/2014 9:50:00 PM
Very interesting that you chose limerick form for that past lives contest. I can't think of a THING to submit for that contest!!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 7:53:00 PM
My only effort was to make it light and have fun. Thanks for liking it Andrea.
Date: 6/27/2014 6:25:00 AM
Very nice limerick Mohan..
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/30/2014 7:54:00 PM
Joseph, Thanks for enjoying it. Mohan

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