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On the Southern Alligator Farm

Down south on the small alligator farm Alligators grown to size to alarm All the workers there too scared Of young gators as they aired Parachuted food to keep them from harm (Inspired by Carolyn's picture but not entry.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/14/2010 9:47:00 PM
Ahhh, you took it in a different way, being compassionate to the gators. I liked that! Luv Andrea
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Date: 7/14/2010 3:32:00 PM
You should have entered this. I like the image of the workers drawing lots to see who wears the parachute. Ha Ha Ha. There's a winning thought. Regards, Gerard
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:55:00 AM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:47:00 AM
Wow, great Limerick, Sara! Are those the parachute fast-food? Thank you for your kind comments and have a great week!...Gert
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Date: 7/13/2010 5:38:00 AM
enjoyed
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Date: 7/12/2010 7:32:00 PM
A nice interpretation of the picture. enjoyed it.
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Date: 7/12/2010 7:11:00 PM
funny Sara!
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Date: 7/12/2010 5:19:00 PM
Love this one. Hope all is going well for you. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 7/12/2010 4:14:00 PM
Sara this is very intersting. I can understand all of your words. I too would be scared. Love it thanks for the picture you painted with your words. God Bless, Cile. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem Without You I Am Lost.
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Date: 7/12/2010 4:03:00 PM
Wow bet its true too.. would not want to get too close to those mouths.. great Limerick Sara.. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 3:03:00 PM
very well written, should be an entry... and many thanks for always inspiring me to write more with all your wondeful and sweet comments...Thank you Michael
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