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On a Whim, We Swim

Sitting by the beach one summers day I turned to my girlfriend to say Shall we go for a swim It's cold not too grim Splish splashing in love do we play Two bodies now exit the cold blue Only one of us appears to be true Now shapely and pert Her body so alert My desire is now to pursue To the beach towel she says on the turn My love you've turned into a worm The cold water has spoken At least it's a token When warmed I'm sure it will squirm http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/humour-5.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/21/2011 4:40:00 AM
a little tongue in cheek - a little double meanings - a little naughty - I like it.
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Date: 5/15/2011 8:44:00 AM
A setting out of where we are right now James.. with an overtone of passionate anticipation in these lines.. lovely and exciting to read luv..
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Date: 5/15/2011 7:41:00 AM
lol, why am I reading this one on a Sunday afternoon is my questions ;) loads of laughter James ;) Congrats on the Rangers win as well x0x0
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Date: 5/14/2011 5:43:00 PM
I very enjoyed the a high humor,James
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Date: 5/14/2011 5:02:00 PM
LOL naughty! but NICE I THINK you want "too" line 4? Light & Love
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Date: 5/14/2011 1:56:00 PM
You are a riot, James! Naughty boy.
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James Fraser
Date: 5/14/2011 2:04:00 PM
If anyone takes my Limericks seriously, they need a straight jacket more than I do. It's fun to be a naughty boy every so often. If it makes people chuckle, mission accomplished. Thank you Andrea for your continuing support, so much appreciated....:)xx
Date: 5/14/2011 10:17:00 AM
You've been busy I see, as always exceptional writes James...
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Date: 5/14/2011 10:05:00 AM
witty, james... lol! nice one here! :) huggs, nette
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James Fraser
Date: 5/14/2011 10:12:00 AM
Many thanks Nette, Limerick's are just so much fun....:)

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