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Old and Grey

With a ring, I'm hoping to say All my intent that came our way I pray for God's grace to rain on that place where our wedding vows display I want to send my guy a bouquet to him my love I'll display His cheeks powder flush as touches play hush These flow e'en we're old and grey __________________________________________ O.E. Guillermo 6:42 pm, April 29, 2015

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Carlene Simpson

Date: 2/23/2016 10:47:00 PM

I like.....simple and serene!

Funom Makama

Date: 5/11/2015 8:29:00 AM

Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 4:09:00 PM

thanks much... :)!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/9/2015 1:40:00 PM

A lovely romantic double limerick! May it not be too long before we see that ring on your finger:) hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/11/2015 7:46:00 AM

thanks Paul..hugs back..:)

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/1/2015 5:11:00 PM

Wow...not only one but double limerick! A change into light poetry, Olive! And still you gentle touch shines through! Kim :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2015 12:39:00 PM

Thank you Kim, it's a challenge writing Limericks, and I'm always keen to try, hugs // :) ~olive eloisa :D!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/30/2015 3:06:00 PM

I can't write a decent limerick, worth it's own salt; much less a double one, but it's nice to know that someone can and fun to read.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/3/2015 12:37:00 PM

I've only just started trying them after reading James Fraser's Limericks. He's really good at writing them, :) ~olive eloisa :D!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/29/2015 2:33:00 PM

so beautifully expressed, eloi... i wanted more doses of this fond musings!.. how are you?.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/12/2015 4:07:00 PM

thanks much..:) weeeee!hugs...

James Fraser

Date: 4/29/2015 1:09:00 PM

Love this double Limerick Olive. It's made me smile widely little one. Warm hugs//James xxxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/30/2015 6:40:00 PM

Huge one James... =) winks and hugs.. =) thanks much!~olive eloisa

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/29/2015 10:04:00 AM

Your words play within our hearts and their magic comes alive. Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/30/2015 6:38:00 PM

Emile thank you for dropping by and leaving your comment.. =')

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/29/2015 8:39:00 AM

- You are proficient in limerick Olive, I have posted a silly one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/30/2015 6:37:00 PM

thank you Ana Lise..=) i just tried my pen on this... :) am glad you like it.. =')