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Nine O'Clock

I'm going to have dessert and put up my feet At nine o'clock myself is who I'm going to treat Nine o'clock is my favorite time of the day It's 8:59 get out of my way nine o'clock is when my kids go to sleep

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:59:00 PM

oh, and a fav!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:58:00 PM

LOVE IT!

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 4/21/2010 12:40:00 PM

You have kids. I have 2 beautiful young pups, three older felines and two intriguing parrots, one of whom, a cockatoo, eats with us at the table or we all hear her complaining. I like this as it is the mundane truth. You're placing in the contests, I see. Good for you, my dear! Just stay on top of that spelliing! Love, Gerard!

Richard Pickett

Date: 4/17/2010 9:06:00 AM

Woo hoo some me time...Very cute Faleshia....God Bless Taz

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/17/2010 4:34:00 AM

Enjoy your free and relaxing time, Faleshia! I have no kids, but I'm also enjoying the evenings when it is getting quiet outside. Nicely done Limerick! Thank you for your comments. I'm back on PS with some new Tanka after my visitors have left. Wishing you a nice and sunny weekend...Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2010 10:10:00 AM

I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Faleshia. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/15/2010 10:40:00 PM

very nice

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/15/2010 10:15:00 PM

Very humorous write. I could detect the humour

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/15/2010 7:47:00 PM

Very funny I like the humor in this one. You do write good limericks. I am not good with them . Keep it up. p.d.

Keshia Murphy

Date: 4/15/2010 2:57:00 PM

I know you get ready a 40 ..oh I mean 8:40 talk to ya at 9:01

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/15/2010 1:57:00 PM

It's great to have some time to yourself after the kids go to bed, Faleshia. You've earned it! I find myself spending too much time alone. Feast or famine, as they say. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/15/2010 1:56:00 PM

Great Limerick...Been there done that....Great topic that you have chosen...Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/15/2010 1:46:00 PM

Peace, at last, eh Faleshia! Sweet! That's minus the calories! LOL....Thanks for reading and posting your kind comments to my poem....Peace, Audrey

Larry Belt

Date: 4/15/2010 1:05:00 PM

Great Limerick.....What's for dessert?....Larry

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/15/2010 1:00:00 PM

peace and quiet---mmmm sounds nice!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2010 12:57:00 PM

Enjoy Faleshia..u earned this dessert for yourself ...after a hard day with the kiddies..luv.. so enjoyed your creativity today..luv.. Linda-Marie..