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New Year Diet

At Christmas as always I ate So much that I put on some weight New year I must try To stay off the pie And next year, well I just can't wait.

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/18/2013 7:32:00 PM

Lola,,,a belated congrats on a perfectomundo limerick...not a single thing could be improved upon! Limerick writing is def your strength!! Let's do this again real soon! ;) gwendolen

Lola Barron
Date: 1/19/2013 8:15:00 AM

Thanks very much. Lola.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/18/2013 3:16:00 PM

Perfect meter..the only one with it so far a BIG gold star to you! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Lola Barron
Date: 1/18/2013 5:42:00 PM

Thanks very much. Lola.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/18/2013 2:00:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your New Year's Resolution..Congratulatons on your win..Sara

Lola Barron
Date: 1/18/2013 3:14:00 PM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2013 11:27:00 PM

this is a very nicely done limerick, great meter, rhyme and humor. Congrats, Iola.

Lola Barron
Date: 1/18/2013 2:55:00 AM

Thanks very much.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/15/2013 10:39:00 AM

Very good New Year Resolution by you here Lola.Congrats on your win in the contest.

Lola Barron
Date: 1/15/2013 1:32:00 PM

Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2013 8:39:00 AM

Lola, ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest.

Lola Barron
Date: 1/15/2013 1:33:00 PM

Thanks again for your comment. Lola.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/15/2013 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations Lola xx

Lola Barron
Date: 1/15/2013 1:33:00 PM

Thank you. Lola.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/15/2013 5:50:00 AM

nice one! congrats!

Lola Barron
Date: 1/15/2013 1:33:00 PM

Thanks very much.

David Williams

Date: 12/31/2012 3:00:00 PM

Lola I second that...David

Lola Barron
Date: 1/15/2013 1:34:00 PM

Thanks very much. Lola.