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My Health Kick

Still on the health kick routine, still losing weight Forty-four pounds down, heading for fifty, can't wait Must be patient Mustn't get complacent Time will prove my efforts will be rewarded post haste

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Daniel Turner

Date: 7/8/2017 11:09:00 AM

You hardly cast a shadow anymore, you're as thin as an old screen door, lost so much weight, no need to operate. that's what happens when you eat albacore:)

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/8/2017 3:14:00 PM

Thank you from non-fish lover!!!

Daniel Turner
Date: 7/8/2017 12:20:00 PM

albacore is tuna Jack:) lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/8/2017 12:01:00 PM

"You hardly cast a shadow anymore" I know, my wife has been wondering where the hell I disappeared to!!! LOL Albacore???

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/8/2017 8:20:00 AM

Last time I kicked my health//it kicked me back, like my wealth//Which is minimal//Nearly criminal!//It avoids me with incredible stealth. SHRINK ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/8/2017 11:53:00 AM

I'm a-shrinking John John!!! YEHAW! Hope to get down under 200 soon... will have to celebrate! HAVE A HAPPY JOHN JOHN!!!