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My First Ride Quickly Died Contest

The day I was liberated and free, After a hard summer job finally, I picked up my used, “new car” I did not park it that far Suddenly there was a catastrophe At sixteen, tears came pouring down my face Through the window I watched in sheer disgrace A man smashed into my baby I ran out of work CRAZY My Honda, short lived, was now a big mess. By: sabina nicole contest: my first ride

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/13/2012 2:09:00 PM
Congratulations Sabina, well done xx
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 3/14/2012 1:11:00 PM
:)
Date: 3/13/2012 1:06:00 PM
congrats Sabina on a grand win for this exciting but tragic event for first car luv..
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 3/14/2012 1:11:00 PM
aww thanks it was bad, I saw the whole thing happen from my register and ran out on a customer to console my destroyed parked car, lol. Usually kids get into moving accidents with first cars, not me! I was working.
Date: 3/13/2012 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 3/14/2012 1:11:00 PM
thank you!!!!

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