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My First Love

Got my first car when I was sixteen The coolest blue car I had ever seen A hot rod fuel injected My foot to floor connected I’m surprised I lived to seventeen I loved my Datsun 280 z A birthday gift from my parents to me Drove it for eight long years When I sold it, I cried tears To this day, I still miss my baby *My first car was a 1976 Datsun 280z By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders for the My First Car Contest (Carol Brown) second place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/15/2013 6:21:00 PM
rhonda,your poem Night Spell would be a great entry for my Faves contest. I am trying to help poet out,the ones who did not make my first Fave contest list. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/13/2012 2:02:00 PM
Congratulations Rhonda, well done xx
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:58:00 PM
congrats Rhonda on a grand win for this exciting entry on your first car .. I do remember those Datsuns luv..
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 1:38:00 AM
wooohoooo.... a gr8 entry for the constest..best wishes........~sashi
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Date: 2/29/2012 11:01:00 PM
well, yours sounds like it was a heckuva lot better than mine. I really like this and also how you told me about your car in the comment you made to me. I hope this does well in the contest. Andrea
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