Mummy

I once had a dream that I was a mummy Don't ask me why But it wasn't funny I was scared out my mind Where is this place and this time When I woke up I felt like a dummy

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2010 1:07:00 PM

falesha, when I saw mummy, I thought for sure you were gonna use a rhyme about the baby in your tummy. haha. But you came up with other good words instead! good limerick form! LUv, andrea

Larry Belt

Date: 4/12/2010 10:50:00 AM

I woke up and my wife said I was a dummy.....Great Limerick.......Larry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/11/2010 9:01:00 PM

A fine limerick. I enjoyed it

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2010 5:28:00 PM

Great Limerick..That would be somewhat of a nightmare...That could compare to being trapped in a life situation bound and can't get free..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/11/2010 5:07:00 PM

funny one--good job

Skat A

Date: 4/11/2010 4:47:00 PM

A funny one . Thank you. Enjoyed .

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/11/2010 1:31:00 PM

Very cute Faleshia and don't rush it.. I have 4 sons and started as a teen MUMMY so its a joy and lots of work to be one ... easy reading on a Sunday evening... luv.. Linda-Marie