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Mickey and Minnie

In a bunker having his way When a golf ball took his breath away Got struck on the head Minnie groaned and said Mick is this what they call fore play Penned April 5 2013

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 4/16/2013 4:50:00 PM

Congrats, Seren. Well done. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/16/2013 6:06:00 PM

Hi Ralph how are you? Thanks for stopping by...Seren

Donna Jones

Date: 4/12/2013 7:10:00 PM

Very cute.....congratulations Seren ....Donna

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/13/2013 2:49:00 PM

Thx Donna ..Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/11/2013 11:01:00 AM

Seren, stopping by to read your winning poem in Craig's golfing limerick. Congratulations with your fun swing ;-) Always & Forever*PD

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/11/2013 12:45:00 PM

Thanks PD ...Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/9/2013 8:16:00 PM

Hi and congratulations Sass, made me laugh lol xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/9/2013 8:19:00 PM

good , Mandy, you ok....Seren

Roy Jerden

Date: 4/9/2013 6:38:00 PM

Good Limerick! Congratulations on the fine win!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/9/2013 8:18:00 PM

Hi roy, thanks my friend...Seren

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/9/2013 4:25:00 PM

Congrats on your win

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/9/2013 8:18:00 PM

thank you Abdulhafee...Seren

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/9/2013 2:38:00 PM

good one Seren, many congrats on your win in the contest

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/9/2013 3:10:00 PM

thank you Francine.. Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2013 8:57:00 PM

he he he.love this one Seren, is it for the couples contest... if so good luck....linda

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/5/2013 11:50:00 PM

Glad it raised a chuckle. Nah it was for the golf one but i mssed the entry. Never mind.....Seren

James Fraser

Date: 4/5/2013 6:42:00 PM

I'm speechless to the extent I'm in serious chortle mode. Somewhere below the canopy of Poets, there has to be CCTV if purely to witness Seren in mega laughing mode in the thinking of this write. What do I say <> this is the format of the 'Limerick' to test the wit of the reader and writer. Top marks girl, cheery :) have a good weekend :)

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/5/2013 6:58:00 PM

lol James, yes I was laughing, am i so obvious.glad it made you chortle, actually was in the shower when i thought it up, so no cameras allowed. hahaha...Seren

David Williams

Date: 4/5/2013 12:59:00 PM

Seren well done just as a limerick should be, good luck...David

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/5/2013 2:03:00 PM

LOL it made me smile when I wrote it, its not in a contest David i missed the gate. Never mind, still decided to post it here...Seren

Robert Heemstra

Date: 4/5/2013 5:34:00 AM

That was funny I read some real good ones this morning. Have a great day!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/5/2013 5:57:00 AM

thanks but I was too late for the contest boo hoo. ...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/5/2013 5:31:00 AM

Ha ha, oh, that's funny Seren! This is quite the twist within your write, "fore play" ha ha! You really tickled my funny bone with this amazing poem my friend! What an outstanding piece, quite the hilarious write, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 4/5/2013 5:58:00 AM

thought I was being clever on the word "fore" but am too late for contest never mind...Seren