Marti's Party

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There once was a lady called Marti Who set up a swinger’s sex party She picked up some keys Said I hope that these Belong to that stallion Artie! 03~29~17

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Roy Pett

Date: 4/1/2017 4:48:00 AM

Brilliant Jan, swingers sex party? I must get out more, love these Limericks, Roy. :))

Jan Allison
Date: 4/3/2017 2:01:00 PM

LOL :-) hugs jan xx

Maria Williams

Date: 3/31/2017 6:59:00 PM

Lol, I hope she did pick up Arties keys?So funny Jan, thanks for the laughs.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/31/2017 7:06:00 PM

She's away at the moment... I must ask her when she gets back:-) hugs Jan xx

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/30/2017 12:31:00 AM

This made me laugh Jan :-) Would be my luck to get the key for the transvestite in one of your other very witty limericks..lol lynnxx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/30/2017 12:02:00 PM

ha ha ha Lynn :-) I do wonder where my muse gets these ideas from but limerick writing is in my blood as my aunt and uncle both wrote this form:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/29/2017 4:35:00 PM

A sexy limerick, Jan. Now you have us guessing about the purpose of the keys. Awesome! Just got to love this limerick.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2017 4:37:00 PM

I have no idea Carolyn maybe they are expected to drive off with the person they chose its not something I've ever investigated lol lol:-) hugs jan xx

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/29/2017 1:54:00 PM

Oh my! No, I guess it should be "Oh Artie"!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2017 1:59:00 PM

lol thanks Charlie:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2017 12:30:00 PM

Marti as a swinger. Now THAT would be funny!! Has she seen this yet, Jan? Isn't it strange that people used to just sleep with whoever's key they chose from a jar? I sure would not be doing THAT. I'd probably get stuck with the big fat bald guy!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/29/2017 12:38:00 PM

yeah you might but he may be hung like a donkey lol:-) Looks Like Marti's not been around to read it but i did send it to her last night as I was having a play with her name and I didn't want to offend her - but she loved the poem, shes a funny lady.:-) :-)hugs Jan xx