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Mango Spring

Tantalizing green was the color of spring green mangoes. Sitting high, calling out to me again from the windows! Pray a strong wind comes around Lays them down on the ground How I want to taste them, but “You'll fall sick” ,Ma echoes! Date written:04/05/2016

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Skat A

Date: 7/15/2016 1:45:00 AM

Sara, good for a first post. SKAT

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/19/2016 6:32:00 AM

Hi Sara. Congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/19/2016 8:42:00 AM

Thanks,yes I was surprised:)

James Inman

Date: 4/27/2016 10:37:00 AM

Cute first post.

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/19/2016 8:42:00 AM

Thanks James!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2016 3:50:00 PM

oh how cute, and the mom yelling out that you will fall sick. Funny!

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/19/2016 8:42:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/6/2016 5:41:00 AM

Hi Sara, Nice first post. Welcome to poetry soup.Wish a successful journey ahead..........hugs

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/14/2016 2:35:00 PM

Thanks!

Dm Babbit

Date: 4/5/2016 2:35:00 PM

Nicely done, welcome to the soup.

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/14/2016 2:36:00 PM

Thanks for reading my poem!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2016 1:37:00 PM

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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 4/14/2016 2:37:00 PM

Thanks for reading my poem and the warm welcome!