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Makes No Sense

I believe in God. I'm glad that I'm not bald. A dollar's a hundred cents, This poem makes no sense. I hope you're not appalled. I love the zoo. Where's Timbuktu? Billy's my name. Wanna play a game? A baby is brand new. I have a phone. Granny's not at home. Can you build a bomb? You're talking all wrong. I'm glad that I'm not grown. Your hair is so soft. My bed is in a loft. My bear's name is Ted. I sleep in a bed. Say hi to Microsoft.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/28/2013 1:23:00 PM
I meant to ask why everyone likes this poem so much out of my others. I know why I like it; it was fun to write. I need more feedback so I can know how to make future poems that lots of people will like. Thanks for all your comments and keep posting comments on my poetry.
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:43:00 AM
What's likable about this poem? It was fun writing it.
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Date: 4/15/2013 10:32:00 AM
Very original and witty. Love the whimsical childlike quality.
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Stephanie Weeks
Date: 4/15/2013 2:02:00 PM
Thanks. It was fun writing it.

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