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Seagulls Take Flight Rose strolled alone on a warm sandy beach as salty sea foamy waves crept to reach net her toes as the wind rose She Jump from getting wet toes instead fell back on her butt with a screech Beach bumming seagulls came flying around while Rose sat embarrassed on the wet ground Plop! Whitewash flopped on her head then up to the air they fled flapping, squawking, with snapping hungry sounds 4/27/2017

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/21/2018 7:39:00 AM

Haha this was funny :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2018 12:49:00 AM

Great imagery in your Lim! Congrats, Eve.

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 7/18/2018 11:28:00 AM

Eve, I love great lims and this is a great one! Congrats for your well-deserved win and thx for your kind comment re mine - Bob

Bartholomew Williams

Date: 7/18/2018 7:57:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your win with this interesting and funny piece! The picture helps enhance your message, as well. All my very best to you!! :) Bartholomew

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/17/2018 9:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/16/2018 11:32:00 PM

Congratulations, Eve on your win.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/16/2018 5:30:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/16/2018 11:48:00 AM

This was very witty, Eve. Would have placed higher if all the syllable counts had been correct, but I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations, Carolyn

Joseph May

Date: 6/20/2017 9:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 6/20/2017 4:58:00 PM

Very humourous ... Yeuk seagull poop lol - many congrats on your win Eve, i found the syllable count to be slightly off:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/12/2017 6:23:00 PM

I like this one, and so should Jan. Good luck with this write.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2017 3:01:00 PM

The story you told is a humorous one, Eve. If it falls like whitewash, Ugggg. How horrible!!

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/28/2017 3:16:00 PM

OHH! Not Good... funny but not good. Thanks for the chuckle Eve, good luck in the contest...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/28/2017 2:33:00 PM

my goodness, i had so much fun reading this fun limerick, eve!..huggs

Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2017 3:08:00 PM

Thank you sweetie ~*

John Michaels

Date: 4/28/2017 9:56:00 AM

Nice limerick, Eve! Good luck in the contest! Regards, John.

Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2017 10:24:00 AM

Thank you for the compliment and the best wishes, John ~*

Joseph May

Date: 4/27/2017 10:05:00 PM

A bad hair day!...Nice limerick Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2017 10:23:00 AM

Joseph, thank you for the compliment ~*

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 4/27/2017 8:15:00 AM

Poor Rose:)

Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2017 10:21:00 AM

Thank you for the visit, Sara ~*

Chris Green

Date: 4/27/2017 7:26:00 AM

This was funny Eve and fun to picture, though probably not so funny to Rose when that seagull sent her an unexpected gift. :) Best wishes in the contest.

Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2017 10:20:00 AM

Thank you, Chris, birds can be pretty messy....I'm not much of a tease or joker so it is very hard for me to come up with stuff that are funny. ~*

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/27/2017 1:24:00 AM

Hilarious my friend, Eve. Much enjoye! A7 for each!

Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2017 10:15:00 AM

Thank you for the compliment and the 7 , Demetrios. ~*

White Wolf

Date: 4/27/2017 12:48:00 AM

Haha, great limericks, Eve! The very best of luck to you!

Eve Roper
Date: 4/28/2017 10:14:00 AM

Thank you for the compliment and the best wishes, White Wolf. ~*