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Quick Exit

One dark night the fire alarm was screeching, Stuffed bag dragging and the cat meowing; A purse hanging off my neck, Oh, I sure looked like a wreck; In the parking lot people were staring! ____________________ April 25, 2015 Poetry/Limerick/Quick Exit Copyright Protected, ID 04-666-887-25 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Limerick, sponsor, Jan Allison, Judged 2015 Fifth Place Fifth Place

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Date: 4/29/2015 11:58:00 PM
Nice one. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/29/2015 11:45:00 PM
Congrats in the contest, Constance. yes, that would be quite the wretched sight how you described it!! Yikes.
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Date: 4/29/2015 7:22:00 PM
I can see that in my mind, Broken! Funny now, but not funny then if this really happened. Nice to see your Limerick on the winner's list! Congratulations! Sandra
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:18:00 PM
:)Congratulations...... SKAT LOVE
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:01:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA
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Date: 4/29/2015 4:25:00 PM
Congrats on your 5th place in my first contest Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2015 7:56:00 AM
Ha ha, she will love it!
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Date: 4/27/2015 3:42:00 AM
weeeee!! . :)! cute!! :)!~olive eloisa
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Date: 4/26/2015 8:42:00 PM
Sometimes we have our worst moments when we're out in public! Witty write, dear. GL in Jan's contest.
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Date: 4/26/2015 5:14:00 PM
we all have our moments lol, enjoyed your write -always,p.d.
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Date: 4/26/2015 4:55:00 AM
Ha ha...The image this creates in my mind...fun pen #7
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:17:00 PM
I Have been there, well expect for the purse part! Loved this
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Date: 4/25/2015 6:06:00 PM
LOL, I can picture this one!!!
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