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Licks and Hairballs

My Persian LICKS with abandon A cat with a mission in hand'en When suddenly he chokes HAIRBALLS stuck in his throat And upchucks over me where I'm standin'! Written on 5/20/2015

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David Brown

Date: 5/29/2015 7:04:00 PM

Thankfully, my little but extremely furry kitty had spared me from such indignity. The carpets, however....not so much! Very funny piece.

Viv Wigley

Date: 5/23/2015 11:53:00 PM

The bane of cat lovers everywhere, myself included. Great limerick, Laura, and good luck. Viv x

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/21/2015 1:48:00 AM

Lol!!!!!!!! Excellent write laura, good luck in the contest........Afolabi.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/20/2015 5:14:00 PM

Lol...not a pretty sight

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/20/2015 5:39:00 PM

I know, huh?! Thanks for your comment, Tim :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2015 3:40:00 PM

made me giggle Laura good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 5/20/2015 4:42:00 PM

Thanks, Jan! We'll see... :)