Lazy Guy

The weeds in his yard were sky high "Just PULL them!" nagged his wife, said he'd try But the thought brought him sorrow Said, "I'll do it tomorrow!" As he sat, eating junk food and fries. Written on 6/19/2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2015 2:32:00 PM

Perfection indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/22/2015 3:14:00 AM

Wonderful take Laura n so is ur win! Big congrats!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/20/2015 9:58:00 PM

Cute one, Laura! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/21/2015 10:55:00 AM

Thank you, Kim :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 7/19/2015 3:19:00 PM

Congrats..that guy reminds me of someone sitting in front of the TV right now...lol. BG

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:46:00 PM

Funny :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2015 3:16:00 PM

haha, readine what LIv said to you. This certainly portrays a lazy guy! If you had had the syllable count right, this would have done better. Congrats in my contest.

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:45:00 PM

Thank you for the placement, Andrea! I was not careful about the syllable count...got LAZY, lol :)

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 2:34:00 PM

Laura, Congratulations on your awesome win... LOVE SKAT

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:47:00 PM

Thanks, Skat :)

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/19/2015 1:47:00 PM

Oh my God, it's ME! Have you been on Google maps, Laura? Great Lim, well done and congratulations, Viv x

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:46:00 PM

HaHAAA! Well, I'm finding a lot of guys are relating to this one, Viv!! Take care :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/19/2015 1:11:00 PM

Hi Laura: great poem i'm a great procrastinator. Congrats on your win

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:47:00 PM

Thanks, Ralph. Glad you liked it :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/19/2015 1:09:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:47:00 PM

Thanks, Jan :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/29/2015 5:23:00 PM

Ha! This is good and witty, Laura! Reminds me of Daisy's lazy husband Onslow in "Keeping up Appearances":) // paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 7/19/2015 3:48:00 PM

Yes, I know who Onslow is, Paul! Funny show :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/23/2015 11:22:00 PM

I just realized, I should have said, I was not eating junk food, I was reading THIS wonderful witty poem!!!!! :) xoxo

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/23/2015 11:26:00 PM

Hahaa! Thanks, Arthur :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/22/2015 9:05:00 PM

This was fun Laura!

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/22/2015 11:21:00 PM

Thanks, Richard :) Glad you like it!

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/21/2015 9:58:00 PM

I think the wife better get some Round Up and spray em' herself. :) Once that laziness sets in, it's a pretty self perpetuating disease. :) Loved the Mark Twain quote. Never heard that one before.

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/21/2015 10:15:00 PM

HaHaaA, I think you're right on that, Robert! Thanks for stopping by and liking my poem :)