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I always wanted to jump out of an airplane My friends they would tell me that I was just insane I took me a chance but I lost my pants Giving the ladies a peek at my candy cane

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Kp Nunez

Date: 6/4/2015 5:31:00 PM

:-)

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/4/2015 9:11:00 AM

Oh the wind rush, hope you didn't get cold in your candy cane,,brilliant limerick

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2015 4:53:00 PM

Oh boy, a santa claus guy!!! Good one, Tim.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/3/2015 4:09:00 AM

:))))... it was broadcast on TV ....... whole world could see it, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/2/2015 3:22:00 PM

Oki... Gotta run, gonna buy you some leather belt straps,that go all way up over your shoulders.. Then you can jump : )

Tim Smith
Date: 6/2/2015 3:26:00 PM

I'm game...let's do it : )

Tim Smith
Date: 6/2/2015 3:25:00 PM

: )......just hope they don't get caught on the propeller : )

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 6/2/2015 3:23:00 PM

and the thought of jumping from a plane gives me butterflies..Its in my bucket list... : )

Jan Allison

Date: 6/2/2015 3:15:00 PM

ha ha ha very funny Tim:-) My pants would be brown at the thought of jumping out of a plane lol Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 6/2/2015 3:21:00 PM

no way for me if god had wanted me to fly he would have given me wings! :-)Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 6/2/2015 3:19:00 PM

I have thought of doing it Jan but haven't done it.