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Juvenilia - My First Limerick

Some children sat down on the floor. They sat till their bottoms were sore. “We could each take a chair,” said one boy sitting there. “So then what are we waiting for?” For the Juvenilia Contest of Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Note: Around age 10 or 11, I had a teacher who taught us about limericks. I really loved it and had never written anything creative to my knowledge before that day. I have been searching my house to see if I kept my very first poem in any of my scrapbooks, but I must not have. I have had this little poem in my memory ever since that time, but am not exactly sure how I did my line 2, so I've created a new line two, though I don't think I was talking about "bottoms" in the fifth grade yet!

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Date: 5/25/2017 4:49:00 PM
Andrea, such an adorable Limerick you wrote at such a young age. Congrats on your placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/25/2017 6:28:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/25/2017 5:11:00 AM
This was lots of fun Andrea.
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Date: 5/19/2017 7:50:00 PM
I hope you keep this in mind when your young students sit on the floor. :) So when their minds start to wander you'll realize when you ponder. That there's a reason when you feel you're a bore. :)
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Date: 5/19/2017 5:32:00 PM
A taste of thing to come Andrea. Well done to the ten year old you.
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Date: 5/17/2017 8:36:00 AM
What a hoot
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Date: 5/17/2017 12:12:00 AM
Oh this is so cute! xD
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Date: 5/16/2017 1:19:00 AM
Nice one, Andrea, great to know that you started out with humorous poems, I've always been the serious type:)
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Date: 5/14/2017 4:30:00 PM
Hi Andrea, well i have started looking at the limerick form now and i am enjoying the reads. This is a wonderful limerick you have written. I like the fun with the kids, i can picture the scene so easily. This Limerick shall join my others as a fave and it is a most definite seven. Hope it does well for you in the contest. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/13/2017 7:16:00 PM
So cute Andrea I love it I hope it does well in the contest. Seven : )
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Date: 5/13/2017 3:11:00 PM
LOL! Beautiful Limerick, Andrea.
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Date: 5/13/2017 9:31:00 AM
Reads like a winner..So a poet from day one..Thanks for sharing and for reading my work..Sara
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Date: 5/13/2017 6:26:00 AM
AD, Aha. You have accepted my challenge. Read my last couple of limericks especially about Lincoln. jth
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Date: 5/13/2017 3:18:00 AM
Heh, I really like this one, Andrea. It has that childlike innocence, obviously, but still gave me a chuckle. Regards, John.
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Date: 5/13/2017 1:19:00 AM
Cute, thank you for liking my Hell Found Me :)
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Date: 5/12/2017 6:48:00 PM
Somewhat funny - I wrote a limerick a while back and got some laughs, I said to my girlfriend - who is Jewish that I was talking to a woman about my poems. She got jealous!!! Guess she still likes me. I enjoy writing and going to self publish a another book of poems, I will be in the showcase in June there!! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/12/2017 4:02:00 PM
LOL, love this & still have a school boy sense of humour
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Date: 5/12/2017 8:22:00 AM
Andrea, my dear, I do not think at that age and with the teacher there you would have used the word bottoms and sore! I think it could have been:" they sat on a mattress near the door" haha! A lovely and delightful Monoku!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/13/2017 9:11:00 PM
whatever I said in that line, the poem has now been improved. haha.
Date: 5/12/2017 8:06:00 AM
Aww, I LOVE this Andrea! (What did you use instead of "bottoms" back then? ;) Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/12/2017 7:01:00 AM
Fun to see where we all started! I like your limerick! I am thrilled to see my 11 year old granddaughter writing!
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Date: 5/12/2017 4:31:00 AM
You did a great job on your first limerick Andrea...GL in the contest
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Date: 5/12/2017 3:43:00 AM
What a fun limerick - wish I had been more creative at an early age! I didn't start writing until 2014 and have no recollection of anything I wrote apart from one I posted on soup and I doubt the sponsor would be interested as it was a poop poem lol - I will mail it you am not sure I posted it on soup lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/11/2017 8:56:00 PM
Fun limerick. It is funny how well we remember some of our childhood poems. I wish I had a record of the really early ones; I did not start saving poems until I was 14 or so.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/12/2017 12:16:00 AM
I didn't even WRITE them except for a handful before I was 45! It's pretty cool if you started out doing it so young, Agnes.
Date: 5/11/2017 8:56:00 PM
And I bet you got an A+ too, Andrea! Best of luck to you!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/12/2017 12:17:00 AM
thanks, I WILL need luck with this one. haha

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