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Jim the Trim

There once was a guy named Jim, he trained at some cool dude’s gym. With his daily work out and his nightly bed bouts; He no longer has hair now to trim. With gratitude to Debbie Guzzi for her blog on Limerick. KIM PATRICE NUNEZ 27 February 2015

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Date: 5/26/2015 8:36:00 PM
funny.
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:32:00 AM
Hello Kim, Well written, made me giggle. Kind regards---John
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:16:00 AM
Almost 80 and still got luscious hair! Some of us who have led a good clean life are treated with special favours! Loving hugs, Jack xxx
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Date: 3/3/2015 4:08:00 PM
“ JIM THE TRIM ”, “ Quite right, sire...curtsy...curtsy...” thank you Kim, some of the time, I do interpret thing correctly. “ grab a glass ”, would love to !!! Never “ think it's crass ” my Dear !!! And why not ??? “ people here don't make a pass ” it would be good clean fun, a moment of transition !, even if just for the moment. Isn’t it where we are at “ having a nice old blast!... ”. Now that is past Kim. “ I'm on a roll! ” a roll on what ? Thank you my Dear, “ HUgs and smiles, sire. :D Kim ” Same to you Kim . B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )
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Date: 3/3/2015 3:34:00 AM
hahaha you made me crazy laugh, lovely Kim! thank you!
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Date: 3/3/2015 1:50:00 AM
hahahha.. :) funny KAbayan.. :)! never tried limerick.. :)! God bless s contest!
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Date: 2/27/2015 4:28:00 PM
I see you have added another gem “ JIM THE TRIM ” ( just being playful ??? ) to your collection of jewels . B. J. "A" 2
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Date: 2/27/2015 4:20:00 PM
great humour Kim - made me giggle:-) got to say some bald me are very attractive like Partick Stewart - but the attraction there is his voice lol:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 2/27/2015 3:12:00 PM
There is a old saying that goes "grass does not grow on a playground" -- loved your limerick!! 7
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Date: 2/27/2015 1:02:00 PM
- Poor Jim :)))) - Well done, Kim !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/27/2015 12:48:00 PM
This witty write rubs off on the imagination, Kim!! All the best. // paul
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Date: 2/27/2015 12:29:00 PM
Not only nice, witty too! Made me think up one just now too!!
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Date: 2/27/2015 12:19:00 PM
Nice limerick!
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Date: 2/27/2015 11:40:00 AM
This Jim must have worked himself so much:)
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