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Jack's Dark Side

Jacko has a dark side as well as one of fun He laid out too long in the hot sizzling sun Didn't turn over Got over exposure White in front but dark on his bum © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/10/2015 9:27:00 PM
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Oh no!!! hehe, truly a funny one. I've lots to catch up on, I must apologize!! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/11/2015 1:09:00 PM
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Absolutely no need to apologize sweet Laura! Whenever, the spirit move ya!!! Love and gigantic hugs, Jacko xxx
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Carol Eastman
Date: 5/6/2015 1:08:00 PM
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Hubby's favorite! He got sick and stayed home for 2 days from work... I Couldn't get near the computer... I swear he even took his naps... resting his head on the keyboard... Poor Fella!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/6/2015 4:53:00 PM
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Fooled ya, huh? Happy to hear hubby enjoyed it!!! Yee Haw!!! xxx
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Casarah Nance
Date: 5/3/2015 7:42:00 AM
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Ouchie at least his man parts aren't burnt...lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/3/2015 10:15:00 AM
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Thank Heaven for small mercies, as they say!!! LOL Huggsies, Jacko xxxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 6:09:00 AM
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posted - you have been warned lol! hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 12:19:00 PM
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Noooo Jack its not lol .... but then again ... it sure got you reading it! Hugs jan xxx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/3/2015 10:18:00 AM
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Very naughty title!!! LOL Hugs, Brother Jack xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 5:52:00 AM
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have written 2 limericks today - cant wait for you to read them may post one later lol ... they have errrr creative titles lol! Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 6:03:00 AM
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not posted them yet wait till the time is right lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/3/2015 5:58:00 AM
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Heading right over there now!!! Hugs, Jack xxx
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John Williams
Date: 5/3/2015 5:26:00 AM
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Very funny limerick Jack----made me laugh a lot-----very creative.......kind regards-----John
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/3/2015 5:46:00 AM
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The title fooled ya eh!!! Yup... should have turned the other cheek! LOL
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John Williams
Date: 5/3/2015 5:28:00 AM
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You should've turn the other cheek Jack.hahaha.....John
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2015 5:13:00 AM
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ha ha ha - done to a turn:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/3/2015 5:49:00 AM
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Did you smell something burning!!! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx

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