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It Was One of Those Mornings

It Was One of Those Mornings The Worst We have no eggs left, the milk has gone sour. Sudden storm and now we lost all power. My front tire looks flat And where is the cat? Set the clocks back so I redo this hour. The Best There is commotion and laughter outside. Dreams unfinished-this now must subside. I yank on the door, The ones I adore. Just for you, Daddy! I have tears to hide.

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Date: 3/23/2016 9:59:00 PM
Hi Gerard, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Vlad.
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Date: 3/23/2016 8:58:00 PM
This on e is going in my fav poems...Congrats Gerard!
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Date: 3/23/2016 3:39:00 PM
Ahhh... last verse got me. Our power goes out from storms quite a bit, awful way to wake up, plus the flat and cat... I enjoyed this.
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Date: 3/22/2016 5:46:00 PM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 3/22/2016 12:02:00 PM
Gerard, congratulations on your win!!! Heartfelt
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Date: 3/14/2016 5:50:00 PM
aww what a great ending to a bad start - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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