Home » Poems » Bl Devnath » I Had a Dream

I Had a Dream

in my childhood i had a dream now time to my tongue's best cream i am selected as S.G. of United Nations among many i am one of the patients yesterday's my face book shows that theme

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/10/2016 10:20:00 PM

Thanks for the explanation. I understand it more now.

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/11/2016 8:04:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend, bl

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/9/2016 10:51:00 PM

A lot of loonies on Facebook, that's for sure (but then again that makes me a loony too) ... funny limerick, BL. I like how you tied your childhood to the modern day. One question though ... I understand the joke, but I'm not completely understanding what "tongue's best cream" means? Sorry if I'm dense ... curious what you had in mind.

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/10/2016 8:09:00 AM

Best cream is tasty so taste of dream is to enjoy now. Thanks my lovely friend for your comment, bl

Paul Callus

Date: 3/9/2016 1:28:00 PM

Well done, BL; you tackled this limerick with the right spirit. ~ All the best. // paul

Bl Devnath
Date: 3/10/2016 8:10:00 AM

Thanks my lovey friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl