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I Am So Bored With Rain

I'm so listless with the rain for the dreams I cannot attain trapped within this dwelling a story not worth telling a notion that perhaps "I'm insane" puddle upon puddle does flood as the hill side turns to mud this wound trapped within a song of doom once again for now a dreary river of blood behind the window I gaze at muted sight in a haze will inspiration arrive in sunbeams that contrive or will my life drown in a maze ________________________________ Contest "I Am Bored With____" Poet ~ Rick Parise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2011 10:25:00 PM
this really goes with the weather these days.I hate all this rain! good one ,Rick. Congratulations to you.
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations ^Rick on your win in Linda-Marie's contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 11:51:00 AM
Day after day after day of rain can bring on melancholy and boredom for sure..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:30:00 AM
Many Congrats ^Rick on big win in Linda's contest with this beautiful depiction of emotions in verse. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/12/2011 4:15:00 PM
Great to see your success Rick, with this worthy poem's winner circle presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/12/2011 9:39:00 AM
I don't think your words will ever "drown in a maze," Rick. Sometimes rainy days provide an atmosphere for introspection that can help us obtain inspiration for writing. Yet, if you have rain day after day, cabin fever can set in. Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Rick
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:50:00 PM
Hey Rick I wish i could get all the rain and you have the hot sun from here. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Rick. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:55:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your success in my contest with this excellent entry luv... thankxx for your constant support..
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Date: 4/27/2011 12:13:00 AM
GREAT entry, Robert. You have come up with one that is truly something to be bored about, and which is totally beyond our control!
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Date: 4/26/2011 12:31:00 PM
Nice, good luck in the contest.. p.d.
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:40:00 AM
SOUP MAIL, RICK, asap!
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