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How Could I Resist This Challenge

Little Susie had peed her new pants Such an unfortunate circumstance In front of her mother She blushed a red colour … then invented the wet knickers dance! I used the poetry soup word generator and it came up with the word ‘urination’ … now how could I resist THAT challenge!!! (In the UK pants and knickers are what are known as panties in the US) 26th January 2016

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/28/2016 10:10:00 PM

LOL this had me peeing my pants!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2016 7:55:00 AM

Ha Ha Arthur - hope you get to read the updated version written with Rob Bettridge lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/28/2016 1:15:00 PM

OMG--just too funny. Unfortunate for Susie since she'll have to remember this for some time.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/28/2016 1:20:00 PM

Lol Duke I love writing limericks and have teamed up with Rob Bettridge on a few recent writes and the humour is flowing:-) hugs Jan xx

Rob Bettridge

Date: 1/27/2016 1:17:00 PM

How could 'I' resist this challenge as well......Here we go again..... I've emailed you some verses that you can add to.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2016 1:23:00 PM

I get the feeling another collaboration is on the go lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Manny Paras

Date: 1/27/2016 12:46:00 PM

She created a wiggling jig; this is funny, what you did!Fine by me.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2016 1:24:00 PM

Thanks Manny:-) hugs Jan xx

White Sage

Date: 1/27/2016 8:58:00 AM

nice write Jan, well written limerick

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2016 1:24:00 PM

Thanks so much White sage:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/27/2016 8:34:00 AM

Good little ditty with a whimsical feel and good beat that creates a smile in the reading . Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2016 1:25:00 PM

Thanks Emile:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/27/2016 6:39:00 AM

ps- I've just used the word generator and it came back with 'symptomatology'. Doh!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2016 1:25:00 PM

oh now that is a challenge for you lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/27/2016 6:36:00 AM

I don't know, Jan, airing dirty laundry in public..... a fun result, I may have to see what it comes up with myself, I'm short on inspiration at the mo. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2016 1:26:00 PM

I know the feeling Viv - I can't force writing I go with the flow of my temperamental muse:-( hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/27/2016 5:42:00 AM

Very good and witty, Jan! This form is becoming one of your favourite tools, and you are using it with ease. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2016 1:26:00 PM

Thanks Paul I love writing with humour and so enjoy the limerick form:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/27/2016 1:19:00 AM

PERFECT! I loved this Jan! #7

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2016 1:27:00 PM

Aww thanks Connie:-) hugs Jan xx

David Fisher

Date: 1/26/2016 8:18:00 PM

Good one, Jan. Is this your sister Susie from other Limericks?(I think you used Susie)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2016 1:28:00 PM

I don't have a sister Susie ... if I did she may sue me for libel lol I just like the alliteration of the name:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/26/2016 5:08:00 PM

pants, knickers or panties....they are a favorite in my pantry....because when I look for dessert....sweet lips always work....the taste of woman is sweeter than fantasy....very cute jan....irresistible....;)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2016 5:48:00 PM

lol thanks Eric:-) hugs Jan xx