Hot Cocoa

Hot cocoa is my beverage of choice. To it's deliciousness I must give voice. On a cold winter's night There's no greater delight. It makes my taste buds stand up and rejoice! Written by Kim Merryman 10/22/2011 For Francine Roberts "Pick a Beverage, any beverage" contest.

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/14/2011 5:42:00 AM

a fine limerick that'll put a smile on all cocoa lovers faces. Well done Kim. : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2011 9:21:00 PM

Awesome limerick it was and a well deserved win, Kim!

Nancy Jones

Date: 11/1/2011 3:21:00 PM

Oooh them happy taste buds... doesn't get much better than that! Grats, Kim!~N

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2011 5:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Pick A Beverage, Any Beverage" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/31/2011 4:36:00 PM

Gotta love hot cocoa! Delightful limerick, Kim. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/31/2011 2:56:00 PM

Congratulations Kim. Great limerick. Love, Joyce

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/31/2011 12:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Pick a Beverage contest Kim

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/31/2011 12:14:00 PM

congrats Kim on your 6th place win in the contest, great job

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2011 12:47:00 AM

oh wow, your poem makes me remember a BETTER drink I should have written about for the contest, but too late now. I entered my diet coke in the contest. Have you ever had thick chocolate cocoa from Spain?Oh my gosh, it's to die for!!!