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I'll call her a different name
This girl whom I thought was my dame
On holiday she went
With my money well spent
To Malta she went on a plane

Whilst there she met a waiter called Frank
In bed playing sexual pranks
This Susanna my girl
His heart she did twirl
We're engaged, and this is her thanks

I looked forward to the day she came home
With this waiter her hands on he roamed
Hey! Susanna your dumped
I hope you end up real plump
Your a dog, I should throw you a bone

I'll call her a different name This girl whom I thought was my dame On holiday she went With my money well spent To Malta she went on a plane Whilst there she met a waiter called Frank In bed playing sexual pranks This Susanna my girl His heart she did twirl We're engaged, and this is her thanks I looked forward to the day she came home With this waiter her hands on he roamed Hey! Susanna your dumped I hope you end up real plump Your a dog, I should throw you a bone Wow! a man with the final say Our relationship ends today I wish you the best With your holiday zest It's my turn to go out and play

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/16/2012 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "A Valentine Limerick" contest James. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:06:00 PM
Have fun! lol...congrats James..hope all is well. BG
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:21:00 AM
Excellent set of limericks James....congrats on your win : )
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Date: 4/13/2012 11:33:00 PM
the king lives on!..congrats on your fine win, and more cheers to you for all the recent placements.. having TPS technical problems, awwwh!..:) huggs
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:34:00 PM
congrats on a marvelous win for exquisite poetry James ..luv..
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Date: 4/13/2012 10:34:00 PM
James~~wow,,, this one is a late one... a super and wonderful congratulations.. with your valentine limerick * good night. :-) always~ PD
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Date: 1/26/2012 3:16:00 AM
Love sweet love.....come and goes.....Wery good written James!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:10:00 PM
YOu did GREAT, james. It's for Sydney's contest, right? I enjoyed this set! good luck in the contest (long time, no see)
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Date: 1/25/2012 4:43:00 PM
Smile ˜ Yesss, go have yourself a bit o fun my dear ˜ John!:) ˜
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