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High Heels

why do we women wear high heels even if it feels like walking on spikes of steel balancing self and vanity on a pointy stump women everywhere—young, old, slight or plump to demands of beauty and conformity, we all do kneel those capricious stilettos, so shiny but sinister often leave a mark, bruise, corn or blister hurt gullible shins, calf, hips, ankle and back please someone banish them from the rack oh!please forbid them, our reverend minister. inches they do add to a woman’s height wonder if the reward is worth the plight why does she need to be tall as man when it was never part of God’s plan smaller but no less, she’s proved it alright. Written on 06/16/2016

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Date: 8/30/2016 7:52:00 PM
Oh so very true, Sara! I love how you addressed the 'my shoes' theme, and congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/30/2016 11:03:00 AM
Lovely to read this again Sara congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2016 8:52:00 AM
I totally agree. They look great but hurt! Congrats and well done, Sara.
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Date: 8/30/2016 7:03:00 AM
Congrats, Sara. I've often been wondering about the high heel foolishness.
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Date: 8/30/2016 6:59:00 AM
Congrats Sara, for your WIN with this amazing shoe-themed poem! ;-)
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Date: 8/30/2016 4:03:00 AM
Congrats x great poem x
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Date: 6/25/2016 9:03:00 AM
I bet you were speaking of recent experience - found humor and pain. Nice spin on the contest and congrats on your 3rd place win! Jesse
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Date: 6/17/2016 7:19:00 AM
Sara. this is a fun read. I think high heels are very sexy and pretty, BUT I rarely wear them since I got diagnosed degenerative disc. That was over ten years ago. Women who wear these are so foolish. I hardly ever wore them in my youth and my back is still destroyed!!
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/17/2016 9:03:00 AM
Yes,I was hurting at the time I saw the contest prompt:)
Date: 6/16/2016 3:46:00 PM
Your poem made me smile Sara:-) I'm pretty tiny so love wearing heels but not too high - just make me feel better especially if I'm wearing a dress:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/17/2016 9:01:00 AM
Hey Jan,I am short too:( and I wear heels but yes they hurt!

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