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Hey James, What Do You See

On holiday my eyes observed So tanned and beautifully curved Her eyes turned to me Hey! James what do you see? Patience, you'll receive your deserves .

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/7/2015 7:38:00 AM

:)!!! the 4th line made me giggle.. :)! weeeee Dino James!!!tight hugs..olive eloisa

James Fraser
Date: 4/8/2015 1:43:00 PM

Hey! James what did you see ;-) Eyes Wide Shut, weeeeee, warm hugs always little one, Dino James xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/6/2015 12:13:00 PM

Great holiday!! Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

James Fraser
Date: 4/6/2015 12:28:00 PM

It sure was Sara, sometimes moments in life are meant to be, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/6/2015 6:49:00 AM

A mysterious and charming limerick James ... I hope she saw everything her heart desired ... and more:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

James Fraser
Date: 4/6/2015 8:09:00 AM

Happy Easter Monday to you Jan. No constraint, no complaints for in my dreams I faint at the beauty of she, hugs //xx//James xx