Heaven Sent

I once thought you had been heaven sent, but now you bring all this mad ferment. Your crazy emotions and endless commotions tell me we were never heaven meant.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2011 10:33:00 PM

YEs, time to let that one "fly back to heaven." Hey, don't take my tyburn personally. That's admitting you are a sod. hahaha. Anyway, my hubbie snores and I haven't done anything bad yet!!!(so the poem is just fiction!)

John Smith
Date: 8/19/2011 8:26:00 AM

Oops! I woke in the middle of the night to realize I wrote 'Mary Cope' in my note when it's 'Wendy Cope.' Horrors; and you an English teacher.

John Smith
Date: 8/18/2011 11:24:00 PM

My comment was tongue-in-cheek. Please, don't take me too seriously. I see a humorous world. I can't write deep emotional poems; I've tried. Ogden Nash, Mary Cope: my poetry gods. But if you were my teacher, I'd bring you a big apple.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/1/2011 9:26:00 PM

Nice soft humor, John

Steven Cooke

Date: 8/1/2011 3:53:00 PM

a bit of laughter at last, been reading nothing but couples breaking up. this site is more like a counselling service. oh a good write. i like a lot

John Smith
Date: 8/1/2011 10:06:00 PM

Yes, it is a veritable litany of shattered loves; it reads rather like some country western songs sound. I do enjoy yours, though.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/1/2011 1:23:00 PM

Lovely humor and wit , John