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Heart Can'T Be Curbed

voice is not clear net is disturbed one way line so boy is perturbed it's raining storming with thunder sees another baby so does a blunder for few seconds heart can't be curbed

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Date: 3/24/2016 3:03:00 PM
- Life is not easy ..... well written, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 3/24/2016 3:06:00 PM
Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl
Date: 3/24/2016 11:03:00 AM
Nice limerick! I love the title and point of view. Xx
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Bl Devnath
Date: 3/24/2016 1:54:00 PM
Thanks my lovely poetess friend for your visit and nice comment. Loved always, bl

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