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He Had Charisma

A soldier by the name of Patricia Was teased by the guys in the militia Instead of a grenade They made him a maid In his army fatigues he had charisma © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/18/2015 5:17:00 PM

Poor Patricia! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/18/2015 5:21:00 PM

LAURA!!!!!!!!!! Love you sweet friend! Missed ya! Huggsies xxxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 9/20/2015 10:55:00 AM

Such a flirt was our dear old Patricia... A fine one in our malitia... While others went to war... He sought out Trisha, Misha, and Alicia... As the girlies swarmed, to the guys he was an enigma...

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/21/2015 9:11:00 AM

Lucky dude... LOL xxxx

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 9/20/2015 8:32:00 AM

That's my Jack : )

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/20/2015 8:36:00 AM

Yup... that's me! LOL Love Jack xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/18/2015 5:30:00 PM

His fatigues hung up for a skirt....a blouse instead of a shirt....dressed in drag..... all for his flag....all in his way are now pushing up dirt

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/18/2015 5:35:00 PM

You're GOOD!!! LOL

Michael Tor

Date: 9/18/2015 12:21:00 PM

Lol Jack.

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/18/2015 12:34:00 PM

Don't know where this one came from....... LOL

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/18/2015 9:42:00 AM

Hey Santa, I see my middle name there// I hereby assure you no man can bear// a name womanish//sounds a bit Spanish// must be worse than br.....s just the size of pears. Happy weekend Santa! hugs

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/18/2015 10:38:00 AM

LOL So you're a bit of a jester too!!! Love ya dear Kim (Patrice) xxx

Judy Konos

Date: 9/18/2015 8:19:00 AM

SPOT ON JACK!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/18/2015 8:21:00 AM

LOL xxx